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Love, the most beautiful expression
A commitment, beyond condition.
When I say ‘I love you’
I mean that I shall always be there
Not expecting the same in return
But bestowing upon you, all my care.
Love, the most powerful force that exists
To give and only give, it insists.
When I say ‘I love you’
To protect you, I shall conquer my fears
And also color your life with a cheerful hue
So that you could be free from tears
Love offers affection and trust galore
Its purity and unselfishness, one must adore.
When I say ‘I love you’
I embrace you with an undying emotion
That shall neither fade away
Nor undergo any sort of distortion.
Love is trustworthy and never lies
Regardless of circumstances, it never dies.
31 comments:
two thumbs up!
Very well written, Madam :)
*Applause Applause*
When I say "I love you" Ahem... Ahem... May I know the source of inspiration behind this poem??? :D
@ Aditya,
:) :)
@ Miss Kido,
Thanks Kido :)
Btw no real inspiration...just my feelings and some imagination..:)
ahem!! ahem!! pri.. it rocks!! awesome!! well... feelings for whom,huh??
I agree with SJ... For whom Pri? Batao batao!!! :D
looks like its for someone so special!! look how romantic and meaningful it is! sho! tell na!
@ SJ,
Thank you :)
@ Miss Kido & SJ,
Read the 'imagination' part..:)
nothin cn b done w/o ne source of inspiration re.......so stop bluffin n tell me......hu is it.......pssst....ill keep it a secret ;)
its so touching.........one of ur best works..keep goin girl
@ Priyal,
Trust me lots can be done with just imagination :)
@ Gargi,
Thank you very much :)
I am here for the first time. Nice poem. Hope to see more of such stuff here.
@ Abhijeet,
Thank you very much :)
Definitely!!!
I am glad I came by your post from Miss Kido's FB scratch on the wall!.
Beautiful poem and a clean layout!
"Love is trustworthy and never lies Regardless of circumstances, it never dies."
This is the best part!
Btw, could you add a followers widget please?, it would be more easy to follow your posts then!
This is a neat lil' place :)
Welcome to Blogsville, Priyanka :)
Take care.
Mehreen.
@ Pawan,
Thank you very much :) Glad you liked it.
Sure I shall add the widget soon. Have a great week ahead.
@ Mehreen,
Thanks :)
Thank you and welcome to my blog.
Have a great week ahead.
Lovely!
And awesome header! :)
WOW!!!!
Its really one of ur best!!!
Amazing..and honestly like so many other ppl ve askd...'who is the inspiration behind this???'
"Love is trustworthy and never lies Regardless of circumstances, it never dies."
very well written...
:)
hope to see more of such stuff here.. :)
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@ Meera,
Thank you :)
@ Revathi,
Thank you very much.
Honestly, its just straight out of my imagination :)
@ Puneet,
Thank you :)
Definitely!!!
how lovely..you write so well..
hey pri awesome poem.....keep up the gud work n ur blog rocks....nice and classy look....looking forward for more of ur magic work
hey pri....
awesome.....
in barney's word mind.....
...wait for it........
........blowing....
Hey i never knew that u write such good poems...
well as everyone asked even i m asking who is inspiration behind this ? " poem on love " ahem...ahem...
Whatever great work kiddo...and carry on ur work !!!!!!!! :)
@ Rane,
Thanks :)
@ Latha,
Thank you...:)
More of my "magic work" ha...well Definitely
@ Enigma,
Thanks :)
Well again...its 100% imagination!
Thanks again :)
so simple, yet so sweet and effective :)
its very awesome priyanka, but really i too write ok but not as good as this cause, this is just out of this world, i felt a heavenly feeling reading this, i feel good from the inside its so good
awesome yaar awesome, i am so very glad that i found your blog
take care and keep wriitng........
and please please please write more, i am a fan already yaar great work really good, god i am so happy
take care and keep writing.......
@ Rane,
Thank you so much...:)
@ Thousif,
Thank you very much...glad my blog made you feel so good :)
OH WOW!!!!
That was touching..
I like the part where u mentioned
I mean that I shall always be there Not expecting the same in return But bestowing upon you, all my care.
I think that is so sweet just to say it too...
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I... ahem... so wish all that you have said is true! :) Somehow, what seems beautiful in verse often gets mangled in life, doesn't it?
Anyway, let me not let the clouds of my head or past taint the theme of the verse! :D It was indeed lovely... :)
niiiice
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