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India of my Dreams…
A nation rich in religion and culture
A treat to the eyes, the snowy peaks and green pasture
People of religions of different kinds
Living with unselfish love and broad minds
Where corruption, crime and poverty have no birth
Oh! It feels as if heavens have landed on earth
A land where success is accepted with humility
And everyone is working to increase the nation’s purity
Everywhere the cords of hatred severed
Such a nation whose etiquettes are always revered
A country of achievements, fulfilled visions and dreams
Where knowledge flows smoothly like streams
A nation that stands not on ‘I’ but on ‘We’
A nation like that, India of my dreams would be!!!
16 comments:
wow!! that was indeed an inspirational piece of poetry that too when the country celebrated 62 glorious years of freedom.... :) You have expressed the dream that's hidden in the heart of every Indian...
Keep it up... Good work..
Looking forward for more of such outstanding poems...
good luck... :)
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L :)
I see a visionary here... :)
Kudos!!!
@ Voice of the Unknown,
Thanks...glad to do my bit to celebrate '62 glorious years of freedom' :)
@ Miss Kido,
Thank you very much...visionary ha...I'm honored :)
Patriotically poetic!
Good work, but all that you dreamed for maybe impossible to achieve in the coming 50 years or so!
Good going here!
Thanks for dropping by my blog!
I have posted the second part, do read it if you wish too!
Cheers!
happy independence day to you and your people :)
wonderfully written.. India ..beautiful India..
Rane
@ Pawan,
Thanks but I guess there's still no harm in dreaming :)
Sure I checked it...:)
@ Warm Sunshine,
:)
@ Rane,
Thank you :)
Desiderata :)
its beautiful yaar, its not just your dream but of every Indian, let this dream become true, liked it very much and i love your template its awesome, really good, and the blog pic on top is also awesome :)
first timer and i like it already
take care and keep writing.......
nice thoughts. you sound like the next Tagore. He too wrote something similar
@ Mon,
Thanks :)
@ Thousif,
Thanks a lot...glad you liked my blog so much :)
@ Abhijeet,
"sound like the next tagore"...Thanks...that's an honor :)
You have a very creative blog here. Nice poems! It is the India we all indians dream of !!
very nice one actually... But will this ever happen???
thanks for commenting on my blog... keep visiting again.... thanks a lot...
@ Pra,
Thank you very much...:)
@ Shankar,
Thanks, Well I've crossed my fingers for the earliest.
You're welcome...sure :)
very nice piece of poetry :) patriotic :) although i think i'm a lil late here, and why's there no title, was it intentional?
That is very nicely expressed.. i really liked the theme behind the poem.. but should stay.. the kind of atmosphere that you portray. we still have a lot of work to do...
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